Chapter 21
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AVERY –
The driver was right on time, just like she said he would be. Yet, it’s now past ten, which officially makes me late, and I have no one to blame but my own nervous pacing.
The building he dropped me at is imposing, all old stone and darkened windows, with no name or number to mark it. A single, broad-shouldered man at the door gives a curt nod and opens it for me without a word.
I step inside, and the world shifts. The air is thick with the scent of old leather, cigar smoke, and expensive whiskey. It’s not a loud place, but the silence here is heavy, weighted with murmured conversations and the soft clink of crystal. This isn’t a club for fun; it’s a club for business. The kind of business that happens in shadows.
Victoria is seated at the far end of the bar, a pool of calm in the low light. She’s a silhouette of power in a severely tailored black dress-suit, a stark contrast to the soft, daring dress she chose for me. One leg is crossed over the other, a glass of amber liquid held loosely in her hand.
For a fraction of a second, before she sees me, her posture is rigid, one arm held stiffly at her side. It’s the only hint of unease I’ve ever seen on her. Then her eyes lock onto me across the room, and it vanishes, replaced by something softer, almost relieved. A slow smile curves her lips as she stands.
“You’re late,” she says as I reach her, her voice a low hum that blends with the room’s quiet murmur.
“Traffic,” I lie. The truth is, I spent twenty minutes in a staring contest with my own reflection, trying to convince myself I could actually walk out the door like this.
She closes the distance between us in a few effortless strides, kisses my cheek, and her lips linger near my ear. That’s when I see it, up close. The split in her lower lip, carefully painted over with deep red lipstick but still visible. A small, violent flaw in her perfect facade.
“You’re hurt,” I breathe, the words escaping before I can stop them.
She pulls back just enough to meet my eyes, her expression unreadable for a heartbeat. Then she gently brushes a strand of hair from my face, her thumb skimming my temple. “That’s part of the job, love.”
The way she says it – so simple, so final – isn’t a complaint. It’s a comfort. An attempt to soothe the worry she must see on my face.
“It’s good to see you, darling,” she says again, as if the moment never happened.
My legs nearly buckle. Darling. It’s such a simple, common word, but from her, it’s not common at all. It’s a claim. It’s a secret. It’s a shot of something warm and potent straight to my system.
She reaches past me, takes a glass from the bar, and offers it to me – the same dark vanilla drink from our first night.
“To take the edge off,” she says, her voice smooth as always.
I take the glass, careful not to spill it with my suddenly unsteady hands. “Is it needed, then?”
She chuckles, a low, intimate sound, and then she’s close again, leaning in, her mouth brushing my ear as she murmurs,
“You tell me when the night ends.”
***
VICTORIA –
The dress fits her exactly the way I pictured it would when I had it delivered. The fabric clings to her form like a second skin, each movement highlighting the curve of her hips, the slit parting to reveal just enough thigh to make my breath catch. She looks stunning.
“What is this place?” Avery asks curiously, her gaze sweeping over the wood-paneled walls and the discreet, powerful clientele.
I can only smirk. It’s a question that deserves no answer yet. “Avery,” I say, my voice dropping low, a command and an invitation woven together. “Come with me.”
She follows without question, her trust a tangible thing that settles warmly in my chest. I lead her away from the main lounge, down a corridor where the carpet grows thicker, swallowing the sound of our footsteps. The air changes, becoming closer, tinged with the distinct, rich scent of cigar smoke and aged whiskey. I feel her presence at my back, a slight tension in her that speaks of both nerves and thrilling anticipation.
I pause before a heavy, dark wood door, guarded by another silent sentinel who nods and opens it for us.
The room beyond is exactly as I intended: a windowless, intimate arena. The only significant light pours from a single green-shaded lamp hanging low over a round felt table, leaving the rest of the space in deep, conspiratorial shadow. The air is thick, hazy. Around the table, the players are already seated – silhouettes of power and menace.
Mikhail, the oligarch’s son, is a mountain of cold calculation. Simon, the information broker, is a specter, his face unreadable. And the Widow Chen, elegant and sharp as a scalpel, observes everything with a predator’s patience.
All eyes snap to us as we enter. The men’s gazes are openly appraising, raking over Avery with a hunger they don’t bother to hide. The Widow’s gaze is more analytical, a slight, knowing smirk touching her lips as she understands the move I am making. I don’t introduce Avery. The message is clear: This is mine.
I guide Avery to the empty chair beside mine with a gentle pressure on her lower back. As she sits, I see her eyes widen just slightly, taking in the heavy chips, the serious faces, the palpable tension. This is not a friendly game. The realization dawns on her, and I see a flicker of awe, of fear, and then, beautifully, of steel. She understands the stage she is on.
She meets my gaze, and in the depths of her eyes, I see it – not panic, but a thrilling, defiant acceptance. The game is about to begin.
I lean in, my lips brushing the shell of her ear, my hand settling high on her bare thigh. The contact is electric. “Stay close,” I murmur, my voice for her alone. “Watch everything. Say nothing. And if I win tonight…” I let my fingers trace a slow, deliberate circle on her skin. “…there will be a very generous reward waiting for you afterward.”
A sharp, quiet intake of breath. I feel the subtle shift of her legs beneath my touch. When I pull back, her eyes are dark, her lips slightly parted. She doesn’t need to ask what the reward is. She knows. She understands her role perfectly.
The dealer, a ghost of a man, begins to shuffle. The game begins.
The first few rounds are a quiet dance, a feeling-out process. The bets are conservative, the pots small. Mikhail’s impatience is a palpable force. He plays his hands quickly, aggressively, but the table refuses to rise to his bait. He wins a modest pot with a pair of tens, his lips curling in a dismissive smirk. Simon, the information broker, takes a smaller one with a flush draw that no one saw coming. The Widow Chen folds more than she plays, her sharp eyes missing nothing, biding her time.
I play my part, matching small bets and folding weak hands, all the while my left hand a constant, warm weight on Avery’s thigh. I feel her slowly attuning to the rhythm of the game, her initial tension easing into a focused calm.
Then, on the fourth hand, Mikhail’s restraint snaps. The blinds are posted, and he doesn’t wait for the flop.
“Fifty thousand,” he announces, his voice a low rumble. His eyes, the color of a frozen sea, drift past me to Avery, lingering.
The air in the room shifts. The pleasantries are over.
I match the bet without a flicker of emotion, but my left hand remains on Avery’s leg, a steady, possessive anchor. He’s aggressive, but predictable. He overvalues pairs and bluffs on low-suited connectors.
Simon merely calls, his gaze a physical weight, trying to pry secrets from my expression, from Avery’s posture. He finds nothing.
The Widow Chen calls as well, her movements economical. She is playing the long game, waiting for a trap to spring.
The flop comes: Queen of Spades, Nine of Hearts, Two of Clubs.
A useless board for most. Mikhail bets again, another substantial sum. I call. So does Simon. The Widow folds, her smirk telling me she knows she’s dodged a bullet.
My focus is absolute, but part of my awareness is always on Avery. I feel the heat of her skin through the silk of her dress. I feel the slight tremor in her leg when the bets grow larger. I am playing two games at once: one against the sharks at the table, and one for the woman at my side.
On the turn, a Three of Diamonds. The board is still weak. Mikhail, growing confident, pushes another stack of chips forward. “One hundred thousand.”
This is where the real game begins…
I don’t look at my cards. I look at Avery. I lean in, close enough that my next words are for her alone, but my gaze is fixed on Mikhail. “Forgive me,” I murmur, my voice a low thrum meant to carry just to him.
Then I turn fully to Avery, cupping her jaw with my hand. I don’t ask. I kiss her.
It’s not a peck. It’s deep, possessive, and deliberately slow. My mouth moves over hers with a hunger that is only partly an act. I feel her initial surprise melt into a sharp, answering heat. The room vanishes. There is only the soft gasp she swallows, the taste of her, the slight, surrendering pressure of her body leaning into mine.
When I pull back, it’s with a last, lingering brush of my lips. Her eyes are dark, her breath unsteady. I let a satisfied, slightly dazed smile touch my mouth—a perfect performance of a woman momentarily lost to passion.
The room’s attention isn’t just shifted; it’s captivated. Mikhail’s jaw is tight, his contempt palpable. He sees a fatal flaw—sentiment, lust, a loss of focus. Simon’s analytical gaze sharpens, trying to parse the truth of the display. The Widow Chen simply watches, that knowing smirk deepening.
I turn back to the table, my expression smoothing into cool composure, as if pulling myself together with an effort. “I call,” I say, my voice slightly huskier than before.
The river card is dealt. The Ace of Spades.
A dangerous card. It can complete many hands. Mikhail’s eyes gleam. He goes all-in, a mountain of chips cascading into the center of the table. “Let’s see what you’re made of, Vale.”
The tension is a physical force, thick enough to taste. Simon folds, watching, always watching.
It is just Mikhail and me. The pot is astronomical.
This is the moment. I don’t look at my cards. I don’t look at Mikhail. I turn my head, slowly, deliberately, and my gaze lands on Avery. Not a glance, but a deep, consuming look. My eyes drop to her mouth, and I let a fraction of my control slip, letting her see the raw, hungry want beneath the surface. It’s an intimate, silent communication that has nothing to do with poker and everything to do with the promise I made her.
Mikhail sees it. He misinterprets it completely. He sees distraction. Weakness. A woman thinking with her lust instead of her head. A triumphant, ugly smile spreads across his face. He thinks he has me.
I turn back to the table, my expression smoothing into impassive marble once more.
“I call.”
The reveal. Mikhail turns over his pocket Aces – just a pair of Aces. The board reads: 2 of clubs, 9 of hearts, 3 of diamonds, king of spades and jack of spades. No full house. No trips. Just one pair.
He begins to reach for the pot.
“Not quite,” I say, my voice calm.
I turn my cards over. A deuce and a three. The Two and Three on the board give me two pair – deuces and threes. The weakest two pair possible. But it’s enough.
For a second, there is confusion. Then, understanding dawns. The Two of Clubs and the Three of Diamonds were on the board. My two-pair was made entirely from community cards. I had been playing nothing. A complete bluff.
Mikhail stares, his face a mask of stunned fury. “You… you had nothing!”
I lean back, taking Avery’s hand in mine, lacing our fingers together on the table for all to see. “You were watching my cards,” I tell him, my voice cool and clear. “But you should have been watching her. She was the only tell in this room that mattered.”
I wasn’t playing the cards. I was playing him. I used his perception of Avery as a distraction to make him overconfident, to make him blind.
I don’t even glance at the fortune being pushed toward me. I stand, pulling Avery up with me.
“Cash me out,” I tell the dealer, my eyes locked on Avery.
I lead her from the table, my hand a firm, guiding pressure on the small of her bare back. We don’t head for the exit. We move down a darker, more private hallway, the sounds of the club fading behind us. I back her against a wall, my body caging hers, one hand on her hip, the other tracing the delicate neckline of the dress.
“The game,” I murmur, my lips inches from hers, “was a distraction. A pretty little lie.” My hand slides from her hip, down her thigh, finding the high slit of the dress. “The real wager was to see if you could sit in a room full of predators and not flinch.” My fingers brush against the bare skin of her inner thigh, a whisper of a touch. “And you, my darling, were flawless.”
Then I kiss her. It is not a reward. It is a claiming. The culmination of the entire night’s elaborate, powerful foreplay. The real game was always, only, between us.
***
We move through the private corridors, a world away from the smoky tension of the poker room. The only sound is the whisper of her dress and the frantic beat of my own heart. I swipe the keycard at the hallway’s end and guide her inside, the lock clicking shut with a sound of profound finality.
The suite is a sanctuary of dark luxury. The air is warm, scented with sandalwood. Soft golden light from wall sconces paints the room in a honeyed glow, complementing the fire crackling in the marble hearth. A vast bed, low and inviting, dominates one shadowed corner. But it is the long, curved tantra chaise near the floor-to-ceiling window that catches my eye – a silhouette against the city’s glittering tapestry, a perfect stage.
I turn to her, finally allowing the mask of cool composure to fall completely away.
I take a moment to study her.
The daring lines of the dress. The way the firelight caresses the exposed skin of her back and legs. The faint, intoxicating blush that still colors her chest from the thrill of the game. She is magnetic. More so now than even an hour ago, charged with the confidence of having played her part to perfection.
Every minute of the night – the dress, the command, the dangerous game – was a carefully laid path leading here. To this room. To this silence. To the moment I can finally give her what she’s been hoping for, what I’ve been aching to provide since the second she stepped into the club: my undivided, unrestrained attention.
I take a moment to study her: the rapid flutter of her pulse at her throat as she takes in the room, the way she stands perfectly still in the dress I selected specifically for this night.
I close the distance between us, my movements measured, my gaze holding hers.
She inhales, a small shudder in her breath, as I step behind her, wrapping my arms around her waist, pulling her firmly against me. My lips brush the sensitive skin at the nape of her neck. I breathe in her scent – now familiar, now intoxicating – and feel my own heartbeat quicken in response.
Her head falls back as I trail kisses along her jaw, down the column of her throat, to the curve of her shoulder.
I slide one hand from her waist down her hip, then lower, to the high slit in the dress. I push the fabric aside, my fingers confirming what I’d hoped to find. Nothing beneath. Just warm, smooth skin.
A slow smile touches my lips.
“It seems you follow instructions very well, Miss Quinn.” I murmur against her ear.
Her breath hitches audibly. “I didn’t want to disappoint you.”
“Oh, darling,” I whisper, my voice low and sure. “You couldn’t.”
My hand slips into the opening of the dress, and my fingers find her warm and already soaked centre.
A soft, broken gasp escapes her as I stroke her once, twice, then withdraw my touch. A quiet whimper follows, but she remains still, waiting.
My hand moves up her back until I find the zipper. With deliberate slowness, I draw it down. The fabric loosens, the dress beginning to slip from her shoulders.
She gasps again, a shudder running through her.
Not from cold.
From pure, undiluted want.
From total surrender.
Exactly as I intended.
And this is only the beginning.
The dress slips from her shoulders like it was made to fall. Pooling at her feet.
She doesn’t try to catch it. Doesn’t attempt to cover herself.
She just stands there, her breathing shallow, her eyes wide, her spine rigid like she’s fighting to maintain control. But I see the truth in the slight tremble of her fingers, in the way her lips part just enough to betray her.
She wants to fall apart.
And I’m going to be the one to make it happen.
I step closer until my chest brushes against the bare skin of her back. My hands settle on her hips, my thumbs drawing slow, deliberate circles against her warmth. She’s trembling beneath the surface, a live wire waiting to be touched.
“You wore it for me,” I murmur directly into her ear. “Even when you didn’t know what this night would involve.”
She gives a single, silent nod. Complete surrender.
“Good girl,” I whisper. “You were perfect tonight.”
With a firm but gentle intent, I guide her toward the tall window. She follows without resistance, and a soft, shaky breath escapes her as the city skyline fills her view – a panorama of glittering lights and distant movement, completely unaware of what is unfolding in this room.
“Hands on the glass,” I tell her.
She obeys, pressing her palms flat against the cool surface. Her reflection stares back at us – eyes dark, cheeks flushed.
I take my time.
I let her feel my presence in every step I take, in every breath I exhale. I don’t speak unless it’s necessary. Every instruction tonight will carry weight.
When I lower myself to my knees behind her, she gasps – a sharp, high sound she barely manages to contain. I press a soft kiss to the back of her thigh, just above her knee. Her skin contracts under my lips.
I begin to climb her body with my mouth. My lips, my teeth, my tongue trace a path.
Her thighs, the curves of her backside, her hips, the delicate dip of her lower back.
I am reclaiming every inch of her.
She braces herself more firmly against the window, her head dropping forward, her hair cascading over one shoulder like a dark curtain. She’s already shaking – and I haven’t even truly begun to break her.
Not the way I intend to.
When I rise to my feet again, I pull her back firmly against my body. Her skin is flushed, her breathing ragged. I keep one hand splayed across her stomach, holding her to me, while the other moves lower.
My fingers find her slick, swollen clit and begin to circle, applying a steady, rhythmic pressure.
She gasps out something that sounds like my name, then chokes back a moan that sends a jolt of pure fire down my spine.
I let her hover there, on the very edge. I deny her the release she is so desperately close to finding.
***
AVERY –
My forehead presses against the cool glass of the window. I need its solid reality because every part of me is burning up. She’s behind me, a silent presence except for the sound of her breathing and the deliberate pressure of her touch. Her fingers move against me with a purpose that has me shaking, holding me right at the edge of release but never letting me fall.
The ache is everywhere – deep inside me, across my skin. My thighs are wet, my chest is so tight I can barely breathe, and my mouth is so dry from swallowing moans I’m too proud to let slip.
I can’t catch my breath. My thoughts are scattered.
Without thinking, my hand moves behind me, my palm finding the solid warmth of her thigh. She’s still dressed. The contrast between her clothed power and my naked vulnerability is stark.
I turn slightly, just enough for my voice to reach her. Just enough to show her I’m not entirely undone yet.
“Take off your clothes,” I whisper. “Please.”
The request hangs in the air between us, fragile and bold.
For a moment, there’s only silence.
And then she moves.
There’s no hesitation. Her hands go to the fastenings of her dress. The fabric pools on the floor like it was never important. Followed by her bra and panties – like she’s never needed armor to be powerful.
And it wrecks me.
She’s so fucking beautiful I could cry.
Her body presses against mine again with nothing between us, turning me to face her as she slides one leg between mine. Her thigh presses up against me with perfect, maddening pressure, and my hips jerk involuntarily.
She closes the remaining distance until her skin meets mine – warm, bare, and real. And I reach for her without thinking, pulling her body flush against mine like it’s the most natural thing in the world.
We begin to move together. Slowly at first, a building rhythm where our thighs meet, our hips roll and press, searching for a connection neither of us is ready to define.
I bury my face in the curve of her neck, breathing her in. Her breathing is ragged. Mine is coming in shallow bursts.
But we don’t come. Not yet.
We just exist in this space of pure, overwhelming need.
***
VICTORIA –
Her breath is hot against my neck. Her hands on my hips, her thigh between mine. She’s clutching me like she’s afraid I’ll vanish again. And maybe I deserve that fear.
But I’m not leaving tonight.
Not until I’ve taken her to the edge and kept her there long enough to remember the shape of it tomorrow.
I slide my hands down her back, palms dragging along her spine until I reach her hips and pull her flush to me – once, hard, just to hear the way she gasps.
Then I step back.
“Avery,” I say, low and firm, brushing my knuckles along her cheek. “Lie down. On the chaise.”
Her eyes are wide, pupils blown, lips parted and kiss-swollen – and she obeys without a word.
She moves across the room like she’s still remembering how her legs work, climbs onto the velvet seat and settles against it. One leg bent. The other extended. Her arms resting loosely, but her gaze fixed only on me.
Good.
I stay where I am for a beat. Let her look. Let her want.
And then I cross the room to her. Slowly. Like a woman who owns every second of this moment.
I kneel beside her and trace one finger up the inside of her thigh – barely touching. She shivers.
I lean in, lips brushing her neck as I whisper, “You’re doing so well.”
Avery swallows. Her hands curl in the velvet.
My mouth moves over her chest. Her stomach. She arches into me, chasing the heat, chasing relief – but I never give quite enough. Never stay long enough. I build.
“You want it, don’t you?” I murmur, lips dragging down her thigh, tongue tracing heat into her skin. “You want to come for me.”
She nods. Breathless. Desperate.
I lift my head, meeting her eyes.
“But you won’t,” I say softly. “Yet.“
I kiss the inside of her knee and move upward again – not to take, but to remind her I could.
She groans, head falling back, the curve of her body trembling under restraint.
And I smile – a small, cruel thing – and press one hand flat against her chest, feeling her heart race like it’s trying to outrun mine.
Beautiful.
And we’re only halfway through the night.
***
AVERY –
I can’t breathe.
Or maybe I’m breathing too much – every inhale shallow and rushed, every exhale a plea I don’t remember giving voice to.
She’s everywhere. Her mouth, her hands, her breath.
And yet she gives me nothing.
Nothing final.
Nothing to collapse into.
It’s torture.
It’s perfect.
The velvet beneath me is soft but does nothing to soften the sharp ache inside me. I’m stretched out like I’m already hers – thighs parted, skin flushed, fingers twitching uselessly at my sides because I know better than to touch her without permission now.
She kisses the inside of my thigh and my hips twitch toward her.
It’s involuntary.
It’s humiliating.
It’s–
“Fuck,” I breathe, barely more than a sound.
She doesn’t answer. Just drags her mouth away, up, up, away from where I need her and plants a kiss just below my ribs. Her lips burn against my skin like a brand.
I look down at her.
She meets my gaze – dark, endless, controlled – and the way she looks at me could make me come on its own.
Except she won’t let me.
“I could fall apart right now,” I whisper, like a confession.
She only raises an eyebrow, one corner of her mouth quirking like she’s pleased.
Then she presses her palm to my chest – right over my heart – and holds it there.
I think I moan. Or sob. I’m not sure what escapes my mouth, only that I’ve never needed something and someone so much in my life and never not had it when I wanted it.
This – whatever this is – hurts in the most exquisite way.
“I want you to ruin me,” I whisper again, mouth dry.
She leans closer, lips brushing the shell of my ear.
“Oh, I intend to,” she says, voice silk and promise. “But Not just yet”
***
VICTORIA –
She’s wrecked.
Beautifully, exquisitely wrecked – trembling on the velvet beneath me, lips parted, chest rising in ragged little breaths. Her thighs are slick. Her hands are twitching at her sides like they don’t know what to do without my permission.
Good.
That’s exactly where I want her.
I’ve held her on the edge for what feels like hours. Tasted her. Touched her. Denied her, until her need poured out of her like breathless, broken prayer.
And now?
Now I need to watch her fall apart.
With me.
Because no one else gets this. No one else gets to see her like this – glassy-eyed, flushed, soaked, desperate for a release that only I will give her.
I crawl over her, smooth as smoke, and straddle her thighs. Her breath stutters. She looks up at me like she’s drowning, and I’m the storm that pulled her under.
And when my slick heat meets the inside of her thigh, she gasps – eyes widening, hands clenching the velvet like it’s the only thing tethering her to this world.
She’s not expecting me to be this wet.
She doesn’t realize she did this to me.
I trail my hand up her chest. Slowly. My fingers slide over the delicate line of her throat. And then I wrap my hand around it.
Not hard. Just enough.
Her breath catches – not from fear, but from something deeper. Her eyes widen, her lips part, her legs twitch beneath me like she’s already so close she might break from the weight of one more second.
My hand doesn’t move.
I want her to feel it – my control, my presence, my claim.
“Breathe,” I murmur, low and dark and certain.
She does.
Barely.
And then I begin to grind.
Deliberate. Measured. Pressing our heat together with devastating friction, her thigh against mine, my center slick and aching as I move on her, with her.
Her hands fly to my hips – digging in, trying to pull me harder, closer, faster.
But I control the rhythm tonight.
“Keep your eyes on me,” I command, low and dangerous.
She obeys.
God, she obeys so beautifully.
Every flick of my hips is a threat. A promise. A fire. Her breath turns to ragged moans, her hands trembling as I ride her thigh, our slickness mixing, our heat unbearable.
Her mouth is open like she wants to scream. Or beg.
Maybe both.
I tighten my grip on her throat – just a little – and she gasps. It shoots through her like lightning. Her nails sink into my skin.
I’m soaked. Dripping onto her. I can feel the tremors starting in my core, my own orgasm already rising like a wave I can’t stop – not with the way she’s looking at me, needing me, giving herself to me.
“Don’t come yet,” I whisper, lips brushing her ear.
She lets out a whimper. A desperate, pleading sound that sounds like please and fuck and I can’t.
I let her writhe beneath me, trembling. Her clit is pressed to my center, every shift of my hips sending shockwaves through both of us.
I press harder.
Grind deeper.
She’s trembling so hard now, panting, her eyes wet and wild and locked on mine–
And I want to see her break.
I want her to see me fall apart with her.
So, I don’t stop her.
I keep grinding, letting the pleasure build until her body is taut and quivering beneath me. Only then do I grant the wordless command, my own rhythm finally allowing her to fall apart.
And God, she comes hard.
Her entire body arches, a cry ripping from her throat that I’ll remember for the rest of my fucking life. And I follow – no hesitation, no control left – falling with her. My hips jerk against her thigh, pleasure detonating through me, white-hot, molten, brutal. I can’t think. Can’t breathe. My mouth is open against her lips and I come with a moan I can’t contain.
And I don’t stop moving until the aftershocks pulse out through both of us like waves dragging us under and dragging us home.
It doesn’t stop. Not for a long time.
We’re a mess – slick, shaking, clinging to each other in the wreckage of what we just did. What we are.
I ease my hand from her throat, finally, fingers trailing down her chest as she gasps and collapses fully into the velvet beneath us.
I bend over and kiss her lips. Soft, claiming, mine.
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